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November 19th, 2009, 6:18 pm


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i feel the pacing is bad and clunky on these few pages. i dont feel it makes a lot of sense really =/

posted on November 19th, 2009, 6:18 pm


posted on August 17th, 2019, 6:49 pm


Your pacing is fine! I think many comic artist often question themselves with their comic's pace (I know I did!) when they reach a certain point in a chapter. It's always, "Is my story going too slow?" or "Is it going by too fast that people won't understand what's going on?" Your pacing is PERFECT, so no qualms here. =D

posted on November 19th, 2009, 7:36 pm


It does make sense! ^w^

The pages are fine with the pace.

posted on November 20th, 2009, 3:04 am


no no it does, it goes perfectly together, nothin wrong with the pacin, i think i should hit u for every bad thing u say about ur comic lol, u shouldn't its really entertaining, great characters, and exiting, and i like the feel tht it does come across as being cheesy, this story is like something tht could happen in real life. i just love tht way of potrayin a story

posted on November 20th, 2009, 7:49 am


Hmm I agree with what everyone else has said. You dramatically improve with each page, you know. The way you draw lines is really creative too

posted on November 20th, 2009, 6:26 pm