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March 30th, 2009, 4:42 pm

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3o-s-knight

weirdly for some reaosn page 68 is beofre page 67.

more problems her,e i really don't like the figure work in this page. i hope it is not getting to boring either =S

@lol- haha => I already replied to your last post on that last page! thank you =] i very much am amused by your somments on the characters XD

also i'm dead flattered that you featured my characters in your comic DDD: *runs to look* and i'm rlelay enjoying your comic so far, i was so exited to know you made one!!

anyways, thank you to everyone for recent support. =') also, thank you to everyone for your crit, i really find it all helpful, and it all keeps me going with the comic every day... i'm incredably greatful more than you know =')

posted on March 30th, 2009, 4:40 pm

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posted on October 17th, 2017, 1:53 pm

annhell

sweet updates =D Looks like he's not as bad as we thought. Who could stay mad at such a sweet lass like Lucy for long ^3^

posted on March 30th, 2009, 10:03 pm

Prank

Coooooooool, published! :o I would most defiantly buy that if I were to cross upon it in a store. Very, very awesome indeed.

Awww D: I hope you get better in reference to your throat. *rub rub*

No need to apologize ;) I admire you for inking by hand though, that is quite amazing.

Awww once again, too bad about the ink color though I do see it as brown although much more bolder than the brown used before. I kind of like and it gives the scene intensity although it somewhat out of place among the other pages D: You could try some digital editing.

As a kid I found Tuxedo Mask to be the coolest guy ever.

OMGWTFBQQ :o I watched Flint The Time Dectective too, it was really weird but really cool at the same time. I loved the Da Vinci episode. Monster Rancher was epic as well.

Are your pages from a sketchbook or do you use the old lick and rip technique :3? Noticed some ripping on page 67.

Which is an hilarious page btw, very expressive and a constant movement in characters. Lovin' DD and his rambling and apparently constantly angry way of being. Lucy makes a nice contrast being the epitome of innocently cute, PUPPY EYES :3

I really like DD for some reason and page 68 only serves to amplify this way of being. He has quite a stagger to his walk and style. However rough and crude it may be in a way.

On the same page Lucy's figure work in the first panel is way too cute and precious for words just like her speech bubble although quite a contrast in style to DD's which is much more sketchy rather than implied. DD looks great in the other two panels along with Lucy in the last one but the real problem among the figures is Lucy in panel 2 ): And how her arms are too short and lack any subtlety of an elbow along with her legs moved too much to one side. That would be the only error in figure work.

From having experienced it, I know drawing while sick is not the best experience >_>; Once again, i hope whatever you have clears up soon and painlessly :)

Looking forward to more, as always :)

posted on April 2nd, 2009, 12:47 am