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January 6th, 2009, 3:53 pm

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3o-s-knight

since my scanning stuff has been pretty varied over the last few days, (been setting it all up on me little old laptop) the quality of the page keeps changing!! oh dear.

well i've finally got a scanner working for my laptop, which means i can scan quickly and eaisly, which means i really can update everyday! =D I really hope to keep this deadline up~ i want to create a consistant sort of webcomic people can count on reading~ <3

posted on January 6th, 2009, 3:57 pm

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3o-s-knight

thankye for the wonderful comments so far ; ; twelveo'twelve 'sepcially, thankyou!! can't belive i gotta comment about penelope x'D

posted on January 6th, 2009, 4:06 pm

Arwym Starlight

Your style is simply beautiful. <3

posted on January 8th, 2009, 12:01 am

wikivic

this page has great pacing and panel layouts, i can tell really easily what's going on and i'm left wondering who might have sat down next to her?

i also really like the colours and painting style - they seem to suit the subject matter really well

one piece of crit for this which should be pretty easy to incorporate into your sketches - i think in all the panels, especially panel 1, all of the vertical lines should be straight rather than diagonal (e.g. the door in the background of panel 1, the table and chair legs etc.). you wouldn't have to use a ruler to draw them or anything, just make sure they're parallel to the sides of the paper and i think it would help to give more accuracy to your style but keep the same delicate feel ^^

posted on March 25th, 2009, 4:57 am