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January 3rd, 2009, 8:21 am

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posted on August 22nd, 2017, 4:16 am

wikivic

the pacing on this page works really well, i would concentrate on just tightening up your background sketches a little bit (e.g. panel 2) - i know that they style wouldn't work unless it was sketchy, but a little more accuracy to, e.g., the straight lines of the door frame, and the depth of the cabinet would really help to give us a feel for the rooms she's walking through ^^

but overall though great start! panel 1 is especially nice ^_^

posted on March 25th, 2009, 4:43 am

Zantedeschia

i like the way that scarf sort of "floats" in the 2nd panel

posted on July 9th, 2009, 8:28 am

Renegade12

like the page, the scarf of course n she appears to be determined to do something

posted on April 29th, 2010, 12:24 pm